zh_cn: sync and polish wording style (#786)

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diff --git a/descriptions/ab+/zh_cn.lua b/descriptions/ab+/zh_cn.lua
@@ -2,8 +2,6 @@
 -----  Basic Chinese descriptions  ---
 --------------------------------------
 
--- Last Update: 2024.12.06
-
 -- FORMAT: Item ID | Name | Description
 
 -- Special character markup:
@@ -858,7 +856,7 @@ EID.descriptions[languageCode].trinkets={
 	{"117", "征服蝗虫", "进入有敌人的房间时, 生成1-4只攻击蝗虫#每只蝗虫造成2x角色伤害"},
 	{"118", "蝙蝠翅膀", "{{Timer}} 击杀敌人后, 5%几率在当前房间中获得飞行"},
 	{"119", "干细胞", "{{HealingRed}} 进入新一层时, 治疗半红心"},
-	{"120", "发夹", "Boss战开始时将主动道具充能"},
+	{"120", "发夹", "头目战开始时将主动道具充能"},
 	{"121", "木十字架", "{{Collectible313}} 阻挡每层第一次受到的伤害"},
 	{"122", "黄油！", "使用主动道具会使其以底座道具的形式掉在地上#受伤时, 2%几率掉落角色持有的被动道具"},
 	{"123", "银丝羽毛", "天使头目掉落正常道具而不是钥匙部件"},

diff --git a/descriptions/rep+/zh_cn.lua b/descriptions/rep+/zh_cn.lua
@@ -63,37 +63,37 @@ EID:updateDescriptionsViaTable(trinkets, EID.descriptions[languageCode].trinkets
 -- Table that contains commonly used descriptions for abyss synergies
 local abyssPresets = {
 	noEffect = "无特殊效果",
-	normalTwo = "2个普通蝗虫",
-	smallFour = "4只较小蝗虫",
-	blackFear = "黑色蝗虫，能使敌人恐惧",
-	blueConfuse = "蓝色蝗虫，能击退并击晕敌人",
-	blueFreeze = "蓝色蝗虫，能冻结敌人",
-	cyanDestroyProjectiles = "青色蝗虫，能抵挡敌方泪弹",
+	normalTwo = "2只普通蝗虫",
+	smallFour = "4只小型蝗虫",
+	blackFear = "黑色蝗虫, 使敌人恐惧",
+	blueConfuse = "蓝色蝗虫, 击退敌人并使其混乱",
+	blueFreeze = "蓝色蝗虫, 冻结敌人",
+	cyanDestroyProjectiles = "青色蝗虫, 阻挡敌人弹幕",
 	cyanElectricity = "淡蓝色蝗虫, 带有电弧, 每个电弧造成0.1点伤害",
-	grayConfuse = "灰色蝗虫，能使敌人眩晕",
-	grayPetrify = "灰色蝗虫，能使敌人石化",
-	grayMagnetize = "灰色蝗虫，能使敌人磁化",
-	graySlow = "淡灰色蝗虫，能使敌人减速",
-	grayBones = "淡灰色蝗虫，能分裂出1-3个小骨头碎片",
-	greenPoison = "绿色缓慢大蝗虫，能使敌人中毒",
-	pinkMimic = "粉色蝗虫，能触发随机特效",
-	pinkCharm = "粉红色蝗虫，能魅惑敌人",
+	grayConfuse = "灰色蝗虫, 使敌人混乱",
+	grayPetrify = "灰色蝗虫, 使敌人石化",
+	grayMagnetize = "灰色蝗虫, 使敌人磁化",
+	graySlow = "淡灰色蝗虫, 使敌人减速",
+	grayBones = "淡灰色蝗虫, 击中敌人时产生1-3个骨片",
+	greenPoison = "绿色蝗虫, 使敌人中毒",
+	pinkMimic = "粉色蝗虫, 触发随机特效",
+	pinkCharm = "粉色蝗虫, 魅惑敌人",
 	purpleHoming = "紫色跟踪蝗虫",
-	orangeBurn = "橙色燃烧的蝗虫，能使敌人着火",
-	redBleed = "暗红色蝗虫，能使敌人流血",
+	orangeBurn = "橙色蝗虫, 使敌人燃烧",
+	redBleed = "暗红色蝗虫, 使敌人流血",
 	redLarge = "较大的红色蝗虫",
-	whiteBeam = "白色蝗虫，能生成光束造成3x角色伤害",
-	whiteGodhead = "白色蝗虫，带有伤害光环，造成每秒30次2.0点伤害",
-	yellowExplode = "黄色蝗虫，接触敌人时有概率爆炸",
-	yellowPoisonExplode = "黄色蝗虫，能使敌人中毒，接触敌人时有概率爆炸",
-	yellowMimicExplode = "黄色蝗虫，接触敌人时有概率爆炸，能触发随机特效",
+	whiteBeam = "白色蝗虫, 生成造成3x角色伤害的光束",
+	whiteGodhead = "白色蝗虫, 带有伤害光环, 造成每秒60点伤害",
+	yellowExplode = "黄色蝗虫, 接触敌人时有几率爆炸",
+	yellowPoisonExplode = "黄色蝗虫, 使敌人中毒, 接触敌人时有几率爆炸",
+	yellowMimicExplode = "黄色蝗虫, 触发随机特效, 接触敌人时有几率爆炸",
 }
 
 local abyssSynergies = {
 	[4] = abyssPresets.noEffect, -- Cricket's Head
-	[6] = "红色短距离快速蝗虫，能快速造成伤害", -- Number One
+	[6] = "较快的红色蝗虫, 造成伤害更快", -- Number One
 	[7] = abyssPresets.noEffect, -- Blood of the Martyr
-	[10] = "2只青色蝗虫，能抵挡敌方泪弹", -- Halo of Flies
+	[10] = "2只青色蝗虫, 阻挡敌人弹幕", -- Halo of Flies
 	[12] = abyssPresets.redLarge, -- Magic Mushroom
 	[19] = abyssPresets.yellowExplode, -- Boom!
 	[37] = abyssPresets.yellowExplode, -- Mr. Boom
@@ -117,15 +117,15 @@ local abyssSynergies = {
 	[95] = abyssPresets.cyanElectricity, -- Robo Baby
 	[99] = abyssPresets.graySlow, -- Little Gish
 	[100] = abyssPresets.purpleHoming, -- Little Steven
-	[104] = "1个正常红色蝗虫和2个较小的红色蝗虫", -- The Parasite
+	[104] = "1只正常红色蝗虫和2只较小的红色蝗虫", -- The Parasite
 	[106] = abyssPresets.yellowExplode, -- Mr. Mega
 	[108] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- The Wafer
 	[110] = abyssPresets.grayPetrify, -- Mom's Contacts
 	[111] = abyssPresets.greenPoison, -- The Bean
 	[112] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- Guardian Angel
-	[114] = "较大的红色蝗虫，造成伤害更快", -- Mom's Knife
+	[114] = "较大的红色蝗虫, 攻击更快", -- Mom's Knife
 	[116] = abyssPresets.cyanElectricity, -- 9 Volt
-	[118] = "较大的黑色蝗虫，其他性质正常", -- Brimstone
+	[118] = "较大的黑色蝗虫", -- Brimstone
 	[124] = abyssPresets.pinkMimic, -- Dead Sea Scrolls
 	[125] = abyssPresets.yellowExplode, -- Bobby-Bomb
 	[136] = abyssPresets.yellowExplode, -- Best Friend
@@ -140,10 +140,10 @@ local abyssSynergies = {
 	[169] = abyssPresets.redLarge, -- Polyphemus
 	[171] = abyssPresets.graySlow, -- Spider Butt
 	[172] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- Sacrificial Dagger
-	[178] = "白色蝗虫，能使敌人石化，能生成光束造成3x角色伤害", -- Holy Water
+	[178] = "白色蝗虫, 使敌人石化, 生成造成3x角色伤害的光束", -- Holy Water
 	[180] = abyssPresets.greenPoison, -- The Black Bean
 	[181] = abyssPresets.whiteBeam, -- White Pony
-	[182] = "白色快速追踪蝗虫，能生成光束造成3x角色伤害", -- Sacred Heart
+	[182] = "较慢的白色追踪蝗虫, 生成造成3x角色伤害的光束", -- Sacred Heart
 	[187] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- Guppy's Hairball
 	[190] = abyssPresets.yellowExplode, -- Pyro
 	[191] = abyssPresets.pinkMimic, -- 3 Dollar Bill
@@ -159,15 +159,15 @@ local abyssSynergies = {
 	[224] = abyssPresets.smallFour, -- Cricket's Body
 	[228] = abyssPresets.blackFear, -- Mom's Perfume
 	[230] = abyssPresets.blackFear, -- Abaddon
-	[231] = "黑色蝗虫，能使敌人减速", -- Ball of Tar
+	[231] = "黑色蝗虫, 使敌人减速", -- Ball of Tar
 	[232] = abyssPresets.graySlow, -- Stop Watch
 	[242] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- Infamy
 	[243] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- Trinity Shield
 	[244] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- Tech.5
 	[245] = abyssPresets.normalTwo, -- 20/20
 	[248] = abyssPresets.redLarge, -- Hive Mind
 	[250] = abyssPresets.yellowExplode, -- BOGO Bombs
-	[256] = "黄色燃烧蝗虫，能使敌人着火，接触敌人时有概率爆炸", -- Hot Bombs
+	[256] = "黄色蝗虫, 使敌人燃烧, 接触敌人时有几率爆炸", -- Hot Bombs
 	[258] = abyssPresets.pinkMimic, -- Missing No.
 	[259] = abyssPresets.blackFear, -- Dark Matter
 	[264] = abyssPresets.purpleHoming, -- Smart Fly
@@ -178,33 +178,33 @@ local abyssSynergies = {
 	[273] = abyssPresets.yellowPoisonExplode, -- Bob's Brain
 	[276] = abyssPresets.blueConfuse, -- Isaac's Heart
 	[277] = abyssPresets.blackFear, -- Lil Haunt
-	[279] = "缓慢的较大青色蝗虫，能抵挡敌方泪弹", -- Big Fan
+	[279] = "大型青色缓慢蝗虫, 阻挡敌人弹幕", -- Big Fan
 	[281] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- Punching Bag
 	[289] = abyssPresets.orangeBurn, -- Red Candle
 	[294] = abyssPresets.blueConfuse, -- Butter Bean
 	[298] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- Unicorn Stump
 	[300] = abyssPresets.blueConfuse, -- Aries
 	[303] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- Virgo
 	[309] = abyssPresets.blueConfuse, -- Pisces
-	[310] = "较大较慢的黑色蝗虫", -- Eve's Mascara
+	[310] = "较慢的大型黑色蝗虫", -- Eve's Mascara
 	[313] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- Holy Mantle
 	[315] = abyssPresets.grayMagnetize, -- Strange Attractor
 	[317] = abyssPresets.greenPoison, -- Mysterious Liquid
 	[326] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- Breath of Life
-	[330] = "小型快速红色蝗虫", -- Soy Milk
+	[330] = "小型红色快速蝗虫, 造成伤害更快", -- Soy Milk
 	[331] = abyssPresets.whiteGodhead, -- Godhead
-	[336] = "缓慢的红色蝗虫", -- Dead Onion
+	[336] = "红色缓慢蝗虫", -- Dead Onion
 	[337] = abyssPresets.graySlow, -- Broken Watch
 	[338] = abyssPresets.grayPetrify, -- Boomerang
 	[347] = abyssPresets.normalTwo, -- Diplopia
 	[350] = abyssPresets.greenPoison, -- Toxic Shock
-	[351] = "绿色蝗虫，能使敌人中毒，能击退并击晕敌人", -- Mega Bean
+	[351] = "绿色蝗虫, 击退敌人并使其中毒和混乱", -- Mega Bean
 	[353] = abyssPresets.yellowExplode, -- Bomber Boy
 	[356] = abyssPresets.cyanElectricity, -- Car Battery
 	[360] = abyssPresets.normalTwo, -- Incubus
 	[363] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- Sworn Protector
-	[366] = "2个黄色蝗虫，接触敌人时有概率爆炸", -- Scatter Bombs
-	[367] = "黄色蝗虫，能使敌人减速，接触敌人时有概率爆炸", -- Sticky Bombs
+	[366] = "2只黄色蝗虫, 接触敌人时有几率爆炸", -- Scatter Bombs
+	[367] = "黄色蝗虫, 使敌人减速, 接触敌人时有几率爆炸", -- Sticky Bombs
 	[371] = abyssPresets.yellowExplode, -- Curse of the Tower
 	[372] = abyssPresets.cyanElectricity, -- Charged Baby
 	[374] = abyssPresets.whiteBeam, -- Holy Light
@@ -215,11 +215,11 @@ local abyssSynergies = {
 	[391] = abyssPresets.pinkCharm, -- Betrayal
 	[393] = abyssPresets.greenPoison, -- Serpent's Kiss
 	[395] = abyssPresets.cyanElectricity, -- Tech X
-	[398] = "蓝色蝗虫，能缩小敌人", -- God's Flesh
+	[398] = "蓝色蝗虫, 缩小敌人", -- God's Flesh
 	[401] = abyssPresets.yellowExplode, -- Explosivo
 	[402] = abyssPresets.pinkMimic, -- Chaos
 	[403] = abyssPresets.pinkMimic, -- Spider Mod
-	[404] = "青色蝗虫，能使敌人中毒，能抵挡敌方泪弹", -- Farting Baby
+	[404] = "青色蝗虫, 使敌人中毒, 阻挡敌人弹幕", -- Farting Baby
 	[405] = abyssPresets.pinkMimic, -- GB Bug
 	[415] = abyssPresets.whiteBeam, -- Crown of Light
 	[417] = abyssPresets.whiteGodhead, -- Succubus
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ local abyssSynergies = {
 	[425] = abyssPresets.graySlow, -- Night Light
 	[427] = abyssPresets.yellowExplode, -- Mine Crafter
 	[432] = abyssPresets.yellowMimicExplode, -- Glitter Bombs
-	[441] = "黑色大型蝗虫", -- Mega Blast
+	[441] = "较大的黑色蝗虫", -- Mega Blast
 	[446] = abyssPresets.greenPoison, -- Dead Tooth
 	[448] = abyssPresets.redBleed, -- Shard of Glass
 	[449] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- Metal Plate
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ local abyssSynergies = {
 	[466] = abyssPresets.greenPoison, -- Contagion
 	[473] = "较大较慢的红色蝗虫", -- Big Chubby
 	[478] = abyssPresets.grayPetrify, -- Pause
-	[483] = "较大黄色蝗虫，接触敌人时有概率爆炸", -- Mama Mega
+	[483] = "较大的黄色蝗虫, 接触敌人时有几率爆炸", -- Mama Mega
 	[488] = abyssPresets.pinkMimic, -- Metronome
 	[495] = abyssPresets.orangeBurn, -- Ghost Pepper
 	[497] = abyssPresets.grayConfuse, -- Camo Undies
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ local abyssSynergies = {
 	[508] = abyssPresets.redBleed, -- Mom's Razor
 	[510] = abyssPresets.pinkMimic, -- Delirious
 	[512] = abyssPresets.grayMagnetize, -- Black Hole
-	[514] = "灰色蝗虫，能使敌人石化和眩晕", -- Broken Modem
+	[514] = "灰色蝗虫, 使敌人石化和混乱", -- Broken Modem
 	[517] = abyssPresets.yellowExplode, -- Fast Bombs
 	[519] = abyssPresets.pinkMimic, -- Lil Delirium
 	[520] = abyssPresets.cyanElectricity, -- Jumper Cables
@@ -265,13 +265,13 @@ local abyssSynergies = {
 	[549] = abyssPresets.grayBones, -- Brittle Bones
 	[553] = abyssPresets.greenPoison, -- Mucomycosis
 	[554] = abyssPresets.blackFear, -- 2Spooky
-	[561] = "小型快速红色蝗虫", -- Almond Milk
+	[561] = "小型红色快速蝗虫, 造成伤害更快", -- Almond Milk
 	[563] = abyssPresets.yellowMimicExplode, -- Nancy Bombs
 	[568] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- Divine Intervention
 	[570] = abyssPresets.pinkMimic, -- Playdough Cookie
 	[574] = abyssPresets.whiteGodhead, -- Monstrance
 	[575] = abyssPresets.graySlow, -- The Intruder
-	[577] = "2个青色蝗虫，能抵挡敌方泪弹", -- Damocles
+	[577] = "2只青色蝗虫, 阻挡敌人弹幕", -- Damocles
 	[581] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- Psy Fly
 	[583] = abyssPresets.yellowExplode, -- Rocket in a Jar
 	[591] = abyssPresets.pinkCharm, -- Venus
@@ -285,9 +285,9 @@ local abyssSynergies = {
 	[617] = abyssPresets.grayMagnetize, -- Lodestone
 	[618] = abyssPresets.pinkCharm, -- Rotten Tomato
 	[622] = abyssPresets.pinkMimic, -- Genesis
-	[625] = "大型红色蝗虫，造成伤害更快", -- Mega Mush
+	[625] = "大型红色蝗虫, 攻击更快", -- Mega Mush
 	[629] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- Bot Fly
-	[631] = "2个小型红色蝗虫", -- Meat Cleaver
+	[631] = "2只小型红色蝗虫", -- Meat Cleaver
 	[637] = abyssPresets.blueConfuse, -- Knockout Drops
 	[640] = abyssPresets.orangeBurn, -- Urn of Souls
 	[645] = abyssPresets.cyanDestroyProjectiles, -- Tinytoma
@@ -298,11 +298,11 @@ local abyssSynergies = {
 	[683] = abyssPresets.grayBones, -- Bone Spurs
 	[689] = abyssPresets.pinkMimic, -- Glitched Crown
 	[690] = abyssPresets.blueConfuse, -- Belly Jelly
-	[693] = "3个青色蝗虫，能抵挡敌方泪弹", -- The Swarm
+	[693] = "3只青色蝗虫, 阻挡敌人弹幕", -- The Swarm
 	[698] = abyssPresets.normalTwo, -- Twisted Pair
 	[721] = abyssPresets.pinkMimic, -- TMTRAINER
 	[727] = abyssPresets.yellowExplode, -- Ghost Bombs
-	[706] = "16个分别造成不同效果的蝗虫", -- Abyss
+	[706] = "16只不同效果的蝗虫", -- Abyss
 }
 EID:updateDescriptionsViaTable(abyssSynergies, EID.descriptions[languageCode].abyssSynergies)
 

diff --git a/descriptions/rep/zh_cn.lua b/descriptions/rep/zh_cn.lua
@@ -2,7 +2,6 @@
 -----  Basic Chinese descriptions  ---
 --------------------------------------
 
--- Last Update: 2024.12.06
 -- FORMAT: Item ID | Name | Description
 
 -- Special character markup:
@@ -450,9 +449,9 @@ EID.descriptions[languageCode].bookOfBelialBuffs = {
 	[127] = "↑ {{Damage}} 下一层伤害+2", -- Forget me Now
 	[133] = "↑ {{Damage}} 伤害+0.5", -- Guppy's Paw
 	[135] = "每次使用↑ {{Damage}} 暂时伤害+0.66", -- IV Bag
-	[147] = "铁镐耐久和击退力提高, 使用速度更快, 使敌人{{Burning}}着火, 摧毁大便和障碍物时掉落更多掉落物", -- Notched Axe
+	[147] = "铁镐耐久和击退力提高, 使用速度更快, 使敌人{{Burning}}燃烧, 摧毁大便和障碍物时掉落更多掉落物", -- Notched Axe
 	[186] = "同时产生{{Collectible126}}剃刀片的效果", -- Blood Rights
-	[282] = "留下一路火焰, 能造成接触伤害并使敌人{{Burning}}着火", -- How to Jump
+	[282] = "留下一路火焰, 能造成接触伤害并使敌人{{Burning}}燃烧", -- How to Jump
 	[290] = "一次消耗1心, 获得{{Damage}}伤害提升并在地上留下血迹", -- The Jar
 	[295] = "有几率产生{{Collectible555}}金剃刀片的效果", -- Magic Fingers
 	[297] = "除正常奖励外, 还永久获得1个恶魔类跟班", -- Pandora's Box
@@ -653,18 +652,18 @@ EID.descriptions[languageCode].bookOfVirtuesWisps = {
 EID.descriptions[languageCode].abyssSynergies = {
 	[2] = "3只普通蝗虫", -- The Inner Eye
 	[3] = "紫色追踪蝗虫", -- Spoon Bender
-	[4] = "红色大蝗虫, 造成3倍伤害", -- Cricket's Head
+	[4] = "红色大型蝗虫, 造成3倍伤害", -- Cricket's Head
 	[6] = "黄色短距离快速蝗虫, 快速造成伤害", -- Number One
 	[7] = "红色蝗虫, 造成2倍伤害", -- Blood of the Martyr
 	[10] = "2只灰色蝗虫, 造成一半伤害", -- Halo of Flies
 	[13] = "绿色蝗虫, 使敌人中毒", -- The Virus
 	[103] = "绿色蝗虫, 使敌人中毒", -- The Common Cold
-	[118] = "更大的灰色蝗虫, 其他属性正常", -- Brimstone
-	[149] = "缓慢的绿色大蝗虫, 造成1.5x角色伤害并使敌人中毒", -- Ipecac
+	[118] = "较大的灰色蝗虫, 其他属性正常", -- Brimstone
+	[149] = "缓慢的大型绿色蝗虫, 造成1.5x角色伤害并使敌人中毒", -- Ipecac
 	[153] = "4只普通蝗虫", -- Mutant Spider
-	[257] = "燃烧的橙色蝗虫, 使敌人着火", -- Fire Mind
+	[257] = "橙色蝗虫, 使敌人燃烧", -- Fire Mind
 	[305] = "绿色蝗虫, 使敌人中毒", -- Scorpio
-	[374] = "青色发光蝗虫, 生成造成3x角色伤害的光束", -- Holy Light
+	[374] = "青色蝗虫, 生成造成3x角色伤害的光束", -- Holy Light
 	[494] = "淡蓝色蝗虫, 带有电弧, 每个电弧造成0.1点伤害", -- Jacob's Ladder
 	[559] = "淡蓝色蝗虫, 带有电弧, 每个电弧造成0.1点伤害", -- 120 Volt
 }