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- Updates to page descriptions - Copy edits on a few pages
Shopify · Jan 28, 2025 · 89bc345 · 89bc345
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diff --git a/polaris.shopify.com/content/content/alternative-text.mdx b/polaris.shopify.com/content/content/alternative-text.mdx
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 title: Alternative text
-description: Alt text provides an inclusive experience for merchants who use screen readers.
+description: Build inclusive experiences for merchants who use screen readers
 icon: ImageAltIcon
 order: 5
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diff --git a/polaris.shopify.com/content/content/error-messages.mdx b/polaris.shopify.com/content/content/error-messages.mdx
@@ -114,13 +114,13 @@ Button: Shopify Home
 #### Do
 
 Heading: Couldn’t deposit payout \
-Body: The bank account we have on file was closed. Update your details, and we’ll retry automatically.
+Body: The bank account we have on file was closed. Update your details, and we’ll retry automatically. \
 Button: Update bank account
 
 #### Don’t
 
-Heading: Invalid bank account
-Body: Your payout was not deposited because your bank account was closed. Go to your bank account details and update them to match a valid checking account. Then save so that we can retry.
+Heading: Invalid bank account \
+Body: Your payout was not deposited because your bank account was closed. Go to your bank account details and update them to match a valid checking account. Then save so that we can retry. \
 Button: Next
 
 

diff --git a/polaris.shopify.com/content/content/fundamentals.mdx b/polaris.shopify.com/content/content/fundamentals.mdx
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
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 title: Fundamentals
-description: How to design content to create world-class software
+description: Designing content for experiences
 icon: TextInColumnsIcon
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@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ keywords:
 
 These fundamentals apply to every piece of content you create. For specific questions, dig into our detailed content guidelines for everything from [grammar](/content/grammar-and-mechanics) to [components](/components).
 
-Think of tools you use every day, such as your phone, car,or blender. They all have a learning curve, but the very best of them feel easy from the very first use. Buttons are where you expect them. Labeling is intuitive. Everything unnecessary has been removed, and what’s left is the perfect balance of words and visuals. That’s what we’re building here at Shopify.
+Think of tools you use every day, such as your phone, car, or blender. They all have a learning curve, but the very best of them feel easy from the very first use. Buttons are where you expect them. Labeling is intuitive. Everything unnecessary has been removed, and what’s left is the perfect balance of words and visuals. That’s what we’re building here at Shopify.
 
 
 ## Content 🤝 design

diff --git a/polaris.shopify.com/content/content/inclusive-language.mdx b/polaris.shopify.com/content/content/inclusive-language.mdx
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
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 title: Inclusive language
-description: Make commerce better for everyone by writing inclusively.
+description: Make commerce better for everyone by writing inclusively
 icon: EyeCheckMarkIcon
 order: 6
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diff --git a/polaris.shopify.com/content/content/index.mdx b/polaris.shopify.com/content/content/index.mdx
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
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 title: Content
 order: 4
-description: Thoughtful, crafted content is a core element of a well-designed user experience
+description: How to use content to build a world-class user experience
 icon: TextAlignmentLeftIcon
 ---
 

diff --git a/polaris.shopify.com/content/content/naming.mdx b/polaris.shopify.com/content/content/naming.mdx
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
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 title: Naming
-description: What to consider as you name products and features
+description: What to consider as you name products or features
 icon: ProductIcon
 order: 4
 keywords: