[ENG-6950] Update withdraw modal language

app/preprints/-components/withdrawal-preprint/component.ts

@@ -89,28 +89,28 @@ export default class WithdrawalComponent extends Component<WithdrawalModalArgs>
         ) {
             return this.intl.t('preprints.submit.action-flow.pre-moderation-notice-pending',
                 {
-                    singularPreprintWord: this.args.provider.documentType.singularCapitalized,
+                    singularPreprintWord: this.args.provider.documentType.singular,
                     htmlSafe: true,
                 }) as SafeString;
         } else if (this.args.provider.reviewsWorkflow === PreprintProviderReviewsWorkFlow.PRE_MODERATION
         ) {
             return this.intl.t('preprints.submit.action-flow.pre-moderation-notice-accepted',
                 {
-                    singularPreprintWord: this.args.provider.documentType.singularCapitalized,
+                    singularPreprintWord: this.args.provider.documentType.singular,
                     pluralCapitalizedPreprintWord: this.args.provider.documentType.pluralCapitalized,
                     htmlSafe: true,
                 }) as SafeString;
         } else if (this.args.provider.reviewsWorkflow === PreprintProviderReviewsWorkFlow.POST_MODERATION) {
             return this.intl.t('preprints.submit.action-flow.post-moderation-notice',
                 {
-                    singularPreprintWord: this.args.provider.documentType.singularCapitalized,
+                    singularPreprintWord: this.args.provider.documentType.singular,
                     pluralCapitalizedPreprintWord: this.args.provider.documentType.pluralCapitalized,
                     htmlSafe: true,
                 }) as SafeString;
         } else {
             return this.intl.t('preprints.submit.action-flow.no-moderation-notice',
                 {
-                    singularPreprintWord: this.args.provider.documentType.singularCapitalized,
+                    singularPreprintWord: this.args.provider.documentType.singular,
                     pluralCapitalizedPreprintWord: this.args.provider.documentType.pluralCapitalized,
                     supportEmail,
                     htmlSafe: true,

app/preprints/-components/withdrawal-preprint/template.hbs

@@ -18,7 +18,12 @@
         data-test-dialog-body
     >
         <div local-class='explanation-container'>
-            {{this.modalExplanation}}
+            <p>
+                {{t 'preprints.submit.action-flow.withdrawal-explanation' [email protected]}}
+            </p>
+            <p>
+                {{this.modalExplanation}}
+            </p>
         </div>
         <div local-class='form-container'>
             <FormControls

translations/en-us.yml

@@ -1398,11 +1398,11 @@ preprints:
             error-withdrawal: 'Error withdrawing the {singularPreprintWord}.'
             next: 'Next'
             next-disabled-tooltip: 'Fill in "Required *" fields to continue'
-            no-moderation-notice: '<strong>{pluralCapitalizedPreprintWord} are a permanent part of the scholarly record. Withdrawal requests are subject to this service’s policy on {singularPreprintWord} removal and at the discretion of the moderators.</strong><br>This request will be submitted to
-            <a href="mailto:{supportEmail}" target="_blank">{supportEmail}</a> for review and removal. If the request is approved, this {singularPreprintWord} will be replaced by a tombstone page with metadata and the reason for withdrawal. This {singularPreprintWord} will still be searchable by other users after removal.'
-            post-moderation-notice: '<strong>{pluralCapitalizedPreprintWord} are a permanent part of the scholarly record. Withdrawal requests are subject to this service’s policy on {singularPreprintWord} removal and at the discretion of the moderators.</strong><br>This service uses post-moderation. This request will be submitted to service moderators for review. If the request is approved, this {singularPreprintWord} will be replaced by a tombstone page with metadata and the reason for withdrawal. This {singularPreprintWord} will still be searchable by other users after removal.'
-            pre-moderation-notice-accepted: '<strong>{pluralCapitalizedPreprintWord} are a permanent part of the scholarly record. Withdrawal requests are subject to this service’s policy on {singularPreprintWord} removal and at the discretion of the moderators.</strong><br>This service uses pre-moderation. This request will be submitted to service moderators for review. If the request is approved, this {singularPreprintWord} will be replaced by a tombstone page with metadata and the reason for withdrawal. This {singularPreprintWord} will still be searchable by other users after removal.'
-            pre-moderation-notice-pending: 'Your {singularPreprintWord} is still pending approval and thus private, but can be withdrawn immediately. If you wish to provide a reason for withdrawal, it will be displayed only to service moderators. Once withdrawn, your preprint will never be made public.'
+            withdrawal-explanation: 'You are about to withdraw this version of your {singularPreprintWord}. Withdrawing a version will remove it from public view but will not affect other versions of this {singularPreprintWord}, if available.'
+            no-moderation-notice: '<strong>{pluralCapitalizedPreprintWord} are a permanent part of the scholarly record. Withdrawal requests are subject to this service’s policy on {singularPreprintWord} version removal and at the discretion of the moderators.</strong><br>This request will be submitted to <a href="mailto:{supportEmail}" target="_blank">{supportEmail}</a> for review and removal. If the request is approved, this {singularPreprintWord} version will be replaced by a tombstone page with metadata and the reason for withdrawal. This {singularPreprintWord} version will still be searchable by other users after removal.'
+            post-moderation-notice: '<strong>{pluralCapitalizedPreprintWord} are a permanent part of the scholarly record. Withdrawal requests are subject to this service’s policy on {singularPreprintWord} version removal and at the discretion of the moderators.</strong><br>This service uses post-moderation. This request will be submitted to service moderators for review. If the request is approved, this {singularPreprintWord} version will be replaced by a tombstone page with metadata and the reason for withdrawal. This {singularPreprintWord} version will still be searchable by other users after removal.'
+            pre-moderation-notice-accepted: '<strong>{pluralCapitalizedPreprintWord} are a permanent part of the scholarly record. Withdrawal requests are subject to this service’s policy on {singularPreprintWord} version removal and at the discretion of the moderators.</strong><br>This service uses pre-moderation. This request will be submitted to service moderators for review. If the request is approved, this {singularPreprintWord} version will be replaced by a tombstone page with metadata and the reason for withdrawal. This {singularPreprintWord} version will still be searchable by other users after removal.'
+            pre-moderation-notice-pending: 'Since this version is still pending approval and private, it can be withdrawn immediately. The reason of withdrawal will be visible to service moderators. Once withdrawn, the {singularPreprintWord} will remain private and never be made public.'
             save-before-exit: 'Unsaved changes present. Are you sure you want to leave this page?'
             success: '{singularPreprintWord} saved.'
             success-withdrawal: 'Your {singularCapitalizedPreprintWord} has been successfully withdrawn.'