diff --git a/handbook/strings/join.md b/handbook/strings/join.md
index 3eae120..e61074f 100644
--- a/handbook/strings/join.md
+++ b/handbook/strings/join.md
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ bind @view
   [#value | value: token]
 ```
 
-Let's join this phrase back together. Like last time, we'll join with a `-`. You'll notice that some tokens are duplicate ("l" and "o" appear multiple times in the phrase). To correctly join these tokens, we can add `index` as part of the `given` set:
+Let's join this phrase back together. Like last time, we'll join with a `-`. Notice that some tokens ("l" and "o") should appear multiple times in the phrase. To correctly join them, we add `index` as part of the `given` set:
 
 ```eve
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@@ -77,4 +77,4 @@ The result expected result is "h-e-l-l-o- -w-o-r-l-d".
 
 ## See Also
 
-[split](../split)
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+[split](../split)