diff --git a/email/marketing-email.html b/email/marketing-email.html
index 357606d..cd98d74 100644
--- a/email/marketing-email.html
+++ b/email/marketing-email.html
@@ -1,17 +1,16 @@
 <!--
-    The proper way to do marketing email with TinyMCE is to use
+    The proper way to do marketing emails with TinyMCE is to use
     inline mode, and move all table layout outside of TinyMCE.
-    Tables in TinyMCE are first and formost to display tabular
-    data, not for layouts do doing table layouts in TinyMCE,
-    while possible, is not recommended. It is simply too easy
-    to accidentally break the design.
+    Tables in TinyMCE are first and foremost to display tabular
+    data, not for laying out emails.
 
-    Here is an example of how to do a marketing email using
+    Here is an example of how to edit a marketing email using
     TinyMCE inline mode. The TinyMCE editor is only applied
-    to the rich text parts. All the table layout are outside
+    to the rich text components. All of the table layout is outside
     of TinyMCE. This makes it easy for you to to add other
-    logic such as inserting blocks and drag and drop reordering
-    yourself.
+    logic such as inserting blocks and drag and drop functionality,
+    with the editor fitting within whatever custom logic you’ve
+    created.
 -->
 
 <!doctype html>
