ISA: Gunter Van de Velde comments

[dthaler]

Gunter Van de Velde, RTG AD, comments for draft-ietf-bpf-isa-03

Please find https://www.ietf.org/blog/handling-iesg-ballot-positions/ documenting the handling of ballots.

This is rather far away from my expertise area and i trust my fellow ADs more skilled in this area to have a more thorough technology review.
From a generalist perspective the text reads good and the draft is well structured. I see no objections for this work to proceed

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12 eBPF (which is no longer an acronym for anything), also commonly

I assumed that 'e' was for 'extended' and that BPF stands for 'BSD Packet
Filter' originally described and specified in a paper titled "The BSD
Packet Filter: A New Architecture for User-level Packet Capture" by
Steven McCanne and Van Jacobson, presented at the 1993 Winter
USENIX Conference. This paper introduced the BPF architecture, which
was designed for efficient packet filtering and capture.

Hence a bit surprised why the first words of the first line in
the first paragraph of the draft abstract suggest that its
not an acronym?

105 14 [RFC2119] _RFC8174 <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc8174>__

This text seems to need an editorial edit

[dthaler]

https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/bpf/yI3vl12akSke2KfVR7g2pKfglog/ discusses the acronym comment

[dthaler]

Proposed patch for the acronym comment posted in https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/bpf/G0yjlzZ4GazyQC2gN0jW8YjqGkk/

[dthaler]

Fixed in draft -04