diff --git a/fastlane/metadata/android/en-US/full_description.txt b/fastlane/metadata/android/en-US/full_description.txt index 2c62f6cc61..06700c3cc0 100644 --- a/fastlane/metadata/android/en-US/full_description.txt +++ b/fastlane/metadata/android/en-US/full_description.txt @@ -1,20 +1,20 @@ -And Bible is an open source, offline, totally free Bible application with no advertisements to enable as many people in all countries to read, listen to, and study Scripture as easily as possible and with the greatest personal blessing. +And Bible is an open source, offline, and totally free Bible application with no advertisements, to enable as many people in all countries to read, listen to, and study Scripture as easily as possible, and with the greatest personal blessing. * Bibles, Commentaries, Theological Dictionaries, Maps, and Christian books in over 700 languages -* Off-line for everything after initial download including search, notes, commentaries, etc. +* Offline for everything after initial download including search, notes, commentaries, etc. * Interface in multiple languages * Various Bible reading plans -* Totally free, no ads, no e-mails -* Over 40 English Bibles including KJV and NET (ESV used to be here too and we try to get it back, see FAQ: https://github.com/AndBible/and-bible/wiki/FAQ#i-cant-find-esv-any-more-in-downloads-whats-wrong) +* Totally free, no ads, no emails +* Over 40 English Bibles including NASB, KJV and NET (ESV used to be offered as well, and we’re trying to get it back, see the FAQ: https://github.com/AndBible/and-bible/wiki/FAQ#i-cant-find-esv-any-more-in-downloads-whats-wrong) * 29 Bible commentaries * Extensive dictionary and Christian book collection -* All documents legally distributed (the reason documents like NKJV and NIV are not available) +All documents legally distributed, which is why versions like NKJV and NIV are not available * Strong's integration allows Greek and Hebrew word analysis * Multiple workspaces with split screen * Write personal notes * Flexible search * Bookmarks -* Maps of the bible lands +Maps of the lands of the Bible * Listen to any document read out for you * Automatic scrolling, automatic day/night mode * Compare all Bible translations on a single screen @@ -22,11 +22,11 @@ And Bible is an open source, offline, totally free Bible application with no adv * Open source - improve or change the code if you like * Uses the powerful JSword engine from CrossWire -We are all volunteers; we don't send out nagging e-mails; don't display annoying advertisements; never ask for or receive donations; don't ask for registration; And Bible does not collect any data from your mobile. +We are all volunteers; we don't send out nagging emails; don't display annoying advertisements, never ask for or receive donations and don't ask for registration. And Bible does not collect any data from your mobile. -The provenance of all documents is thoroughly researched to ensure all documents can be legally distributed or permission has been granted by the copyright holder. That is also the reason And Bible can not contain documents like NIV and NKJV. +The provenance of all documents is thoroughly researched to ensure that all documents can be legally distributed or that permission has been granted by the copyright holder.  That is also the reason And Bible can not distribute documents like NIV and NKJV. Notes -* Like And Bible in Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/AndBible/ -* The And Bible FAQ is here: https://github.com/AndBible/and-bible/wiki/FAQ -* Project page at Github: https://github.com/AndBible/and-bible \ No newline at end of file +* Like And Bible on Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/AndBible/ +* View the And Bible FAQ here: https://github.com/AndBible/and-bible/wiki/FAQ +* Find the project page on Github: https://github.com/AndBible/and-bible \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/fastlane/metadata/android/en-US/short_description.txt b/fastlane/metadata/android/en-US/short_description.txt index 5b94ecfdd9..cffe8e6a5e 100644 --- a/fastlane/metadata/android/en-US/short_description.txt +++ b/fastlane/metadata/android/en-US/short_description.txt @@ -1 +1 @@ -Read the Bible, study commentaries or dictionaries, or read books off-line. \ No newline at end of file +Read the Bible, study commentaries or dictionaries, or read books offline. \ No newline at end of file